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Yutaka Nagakura
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PostSubject: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Sat Mar 28, 2015 8:52 pm

Name: Ash Release: Ash Dragon
Rank: B-Rank
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ash
Duration/Cooldown: 2/5
Range: 40 meters

Appearance: The user releases Ash from their mouths creating an Ash dragon in which they can control through mental commands.
 

What it does: The user performs the handseals Horse -> Dog -> Rat -> Dragon and releases Ash from their mouths forming a dragon. If caught in the dragon the person will be put under immense amounts of pressure due to the amount of condensed Ash. The Ash puts enough pressure on a person (With B-Rank or lower health) to break their bones. The dragon is 20 meters long and can move a total of 40 meters from where it was made. The dragon has B-Rank health.



Wordcount to learn: 2000
Chakra Cost: B-Rank
Bonus Requirements: Must know Ash Release

Backstory: This jutsu was based off of Suiton: Water Dragon and Doton: Earth and Stone Dragon. The Nagakura made this jutsu unique by making it an Ash Release technique as well.

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PostSubject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Sat Mar 28, 2015 11:22 pm

Approved unless missed something

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PostSubject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Tue Apr 07, 2015 8:26 pm

Updated

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PostSubject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Fri Apr 10, 2015 5:10 pm

This needs more details, how much pressure? How big is the actual dragon? Whats the health of the dragon? Etc.

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PostSubject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:04 pm

Fixed

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PostSubject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:03 pm

Okay anyone with B rank health or below will have their bones broken as this is worded, is that acceptable?

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PostSubject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Tue Apr 21, 2015 8:40 am

Edited so that you don't make a connection between the dragon's health and the ability of the ash to break bones.

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PostSubject: Re: Ash Release: Ash Dragon   Tue Apr 21, 2015 11:05 am

I was letting you know the acceptable amount of power,

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