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PostSubject: Execution By Kiss   Wed Apr 08, 2015 11:02 pm

Name: Execution By Kiss
Rank: SS
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu kinjutsu i guess
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Duration/Cooldown: 3-4 posts/no cooldown
Range: contact

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What it does: This ability allows the user to absorb all of an opponent's chakra and techniques by kissing them, allowing the user to possess multiple elemental affinities, as well as enforcing the ones they already have and gaining access to all of their victim's techniques that they are able to learn for that element. After the user is done absorbing their target's chakra, they could steal their soul. The user of this technique houses their soul in their hair, making it so they can later switch between multiple bodies using the color course change technique. This technique could also be used to determine what elemental affinities the target has by licking or sniffing them.

Due to one body being unable to handle so much chakra, the user would have to distribute the chakra they absorb into multiple bodies, and use Colour Course Change to switch to another if needed. The bodies can be any corpses, even the ones killed with this technique. The user can only store the chakra they absorb for two topics, before needing to transfer it to a body, giving them ample time to find a corpse or body to seal it in, if they do not they will have no choice but to expel the absorbed chakra losing that element. The bodies need only to be sealed in the color course change scroll to be changed to look like the user, and able to house the chakra absorbed from this technique. The corpses used must be pc corpses. Note that the first time a user kisses someone they can add the elemental chakra they absorb to their original body to be housed.

The body instilled with the absorbed chakra can then use all jutsu of the person whom the chakra was taken from for that element taken. While having chakra stolen by this jutsu, the target is paralyzed, but the target can fight back if their ninjutsu/kinjutsu rank is higher than the user's. Due to being able to only copy elemental jutsu, neutral jutsu such as rasengan or jutsu that are dependent on neutral jutsu, such as rasenshuriken, cannot be learned. The bodies if given a raw advanced element can only hold one advanced element(ex explosion, magnet)

In order to learn a Normal Element such as doton, fuuton, etc, it takes three post.(The targets post included) For an advanced element, 1,500 words must be done within the post period of elemental absorbing, if the user wants to steal the target's soul it will take an addition post. Each body has its own jutsu letting the user have access to different techniques, the user can switch to any bodies in the scroll that are stored with the color course change technique outside of battle. Each kiss will cost a C rank amount of chakra per user's post

In battle the user can only have two bodies with them to switch to at any given time while they can store any number in their scroll, this lets them have multiple option, but in combat they are forced to only choose two. When the user switches bodies they will take on properties of the other body resembling if they never took damage at all from the start, except for the user's hair, which will be the only thing that is the same between all bodies, healing there injuries by switch, If a damaged body is stored it will heal after seven posts, as long as it is not taken out of the scroll again within those seven posts, though if it is the number of posts needed to heal the body resets. Once the element of a target is drained the body will get their element and techniques that will be set in stone unless the user can kiss others with the same elements to build up that bodies techniques, or trains other elemental jutsu with the body.

This Technique can also be used not only to steal one's element but also to take one's chakra. If used for this purpose, a target's element cannot be stolen, instead the user will take an S rank amount of chakra from the target per post of kissing. This makes each post the target lose a set amount of chakra the absorption goes on for a max of four post. Just like the user's soul, The extra chakra is stored into the hair of the user which they can use to replenish their chakra pools in and outside of battle if needed. The extra chakra stays with the user of this Technique unless their hair is destroyed.



Wordcount to learn: 4000
Bonus Requirements: Must claim on list
(add if it is meant for a specific character here)

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Fri Apr 10, 2015 7:37 pm

Start by bumping this up to SS rank if it is all the techniques, etc.

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat Apr 11, 2015 1:28 pm

sorry don't know what you mean by "if it all the techniques, etc" can you please explain?

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat Apr 11, 2015 1:56 pm

Absorbing all of a target's chakra natures and techs in one use of the technique instead of only absorbing one at a time makes this need to be an SS---that is what he means
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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat Apr 11, 2015 3:46 pm

K done

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat Apr 11, 2015 3:54 pm

Remove the soul stealing part.

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Due to one body being unable to handle so much chakra, the user would have to distribute the chakra they absorb into multiple bodies, and use Colour Course Change to switch to another if needed. The bodies can be any corpses, even the ones killed with this technique. The user can only store the chakra they absorb for two topics, before needing to transfer it to a body, giving them ample time to find a corpse or body to seal it in, if they do not they will have no choice but to expel the absorbed chakra losing that element. The bodies need only to be sealed in the color course change scroll to be changed to look like the user, and able to house the chakra absorbed from this technique. The corpses used can be playable characters or Npcs though if an Npc the user must spend 1500 words telling how they found the body.

These can be paths, human puppets, etc but not corpses and not NPCs furthermore make it one topic. Furthermore state that this is needed only after one has already absorbed one kiss, the first one I will let you add to your body(I balance, not always nerf).


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While having your chakra stolen by this jutsu, you are paralyzed, but the target can fight back your ninjutsu/kinjutsu rank is higher than theirs

Clarify that the flesh puppet is the rank you have to worry about not yours(unless it's the first one, in which case those effects should not happen, again balance)

Boost number of posts needed to heal up to seven.

Remove the body switching, you can make that into a different jutsu later if you so desire.

The rest is fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat Apr 11, 2015 5:30 pm

Umm slightly confused here, the souls stealing part is one of the main aspects of the Execution by kiss and is part of it's cannon description. I can't really, (nor really want to) remove that part, as that would be changing a core part of the technique

"These can be paths, human puppets, etc but not corpses and not NPCs furthermore make it one topic. Furthermore state that this is needed only after one has already absorbed one kiss, the first one I will let you add to your body(I balance, not always nerf)."

Please go into more detail about this, I do not understand how corpses would not be usable for this technique, not to mention that paths are corpses as are human puppets.

Clarify that the flesh puppet is the rank you have to worry about not yours(unless it's the first one, in which case those effects should not happen, again balance)

Again what are you asking? Flesh puppet? This is supposed to be the user's ninjutsu/kinjutsu rank vs the target's health scenario.

The body switching part comes from the description itself, as this jutsu is supposed to be used in tandem with the colour course change technique


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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat Apr 11, 2015 5:35 pm

We have had to change other canon techs for balance, what separates this one? Honestly if you give me a good reason for stealing the soul besides that it's what it does in canon(filler iirc) then I suppose you can keep it, but it really has to make sense.

Yes they are, I meant I will not allow NPCs to be used for this, no just regular PC corpses.

Body switching just makes this way too OP to add in, you can make a separate jutsu for it and it doesn't need to be S rank or anything, probably B depending on how it's made.


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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sun Apr 12, 2015 5:18 pm

Changed to pc corpses but let the person house the first elemental chakra they steal inside their own body since it may be difficult to get corpses now.

This jutsu has never has the ability to body switch so I don't really know what you are talking about. This jutsu is meant, and NEEDS to be used with color course change to keep the person alive, any description of body switching are just explaining how the jutsu and color course change work together.

As for the soul stealing part, yes there have been changes to cannon techniques, in rankings and power, but not completely editing effects out of a jutsu. I don't really now why you are looking fro logic or sense in naruto since most things can simple be explained with chakra, this jutsu already moves and has the ability to affect souls as the user's soul from their body to their hair to allow them to use color course change. Since the user's own soul is affected by this technique and color course change, why couldn't another persons? Once this technique has devoured a person's chakra, why could they not affect their soul when the technique already done so with the user's?

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Mon Apr 13, 2015 4:58 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Tue Apr 14, 2015 10:05 pm

gonna keep dumping

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Tue Apr 14, 2015 10:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Fri May 15, 2015 12:15 pm

Denied till it is specified as a Kin jutsu and must have a mission to achieve it.

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat May 16, 2015 3:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Execution By Kiss   Sat May 16, 2015 3:30 pm

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