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Dusk of the Iron Maiden
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PostSubject: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Wed Apr 08, 2015 11:25 pm

Name: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Typeless
Element: Fire
Duration/Cooldown: Until Deactivated/ Topic
Range: 40 meters

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What it does:

When released, the blade of Ryūjin Jakka is engulfed in fire. The aura of this weapon  engulfs the surrounding landscape in a blazing firestorm, the heat of which is intense enough to scorch the sky. The flames movement and burning power and Burns those with A rank health and below, that includes objects and items, etc. Resealing Ryūjin Jakka does not deactivate any ability already used against an opponent.

Ennetsu Jigoku (炎熱地獄, Flames of Hell): Creates seven or more immense pillars of flame which surround an area. The intent of this technique is to trap the opponent in the caged inferno and destroy them. The power of this technique can destroy. Each pillar is exactly twenty meters by twenty meters and burn at the rank of the jutsu.

Taimatsu (松明, Torch): This technique allows the user to create a great inferno with a simple wave of Ryūjin Jakka. The flames created by Ryūjin Jakka can be controlled, with great precision by the user to attack only the targets he chooses, and he has power over the intensity of the flames. Max range that Taimatsu can travel before becoming dispersing is twenty meters max.

Cost for any ability is the same as the jutsu rank, upkeep for the two abilities are b rank, cool down is the same as the shikai itself




Wordcount to learn: 4,000
Bonus Requirements: Be Dusk and have Ryujin Jakka
(add if it is meant for a specific character here)

Backstory: After bonding with Ryujin Jakka, Dusk was able to work together with the blade on a higher level like slowly and slowly.This was the products of their labor.


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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Thu Apr 09, 2015 12:00 am

2 ranks above for this is too much. Resist at 1 rank above this jutsu max.

Taimatsu needs a range, duration or upkeep, and control over intensity capped at A rank
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Thu Apr 09, 2015 12:27 am

It was already implied that intensity is capped at A since this is an A ranked jutsu, range was added and duration is two posts

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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Thu Apr 09, 2015 12:31 am

Approved unless I missed something
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:21 am

Like, it's fine but can you remove the everything part or at least put up to the power of the jutsu so people won't get confused?

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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Fri May 01, 2015 6:23 pm

Not sure why this was moved, anywho needs some costs, durations and fixed cooldowns on this puppy.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Fri May 01, 2015 7:00 pm

Jaye you should probably fix this before we continue that battle thread
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Fri May 01, 2015 7:40 pm

Cost for any ability is the same as the jutsu rank, upkeep for the two abilities are a b rank, cool down is the same as the shikai itself
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Mon May 04, 2015 1:48 am

Edit this into the app, please.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Ryujin Jakka   Tue May 05, 2015 2:04 pm

Approved.
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