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PostSubject: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Thu Apr 16, 2015 8:15 pm

Name: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado
Rank: S
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu/Space Time
Element: Storm Release
Duration/Cooldown:1post/2posts
Range: Radius of 20 meters. Distance of travel 45 meters {teleportation or attack}

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What it does:
The user of this technique can create a tornado that can either stun, attack, temporarily blind enemies or, you can use the technique to teleport yourself or comrades to a safe destination. Users with Health equal to or higher than S can avoid the stun, Attack, or temporary Blindness. Those who don't wish to be teleported must have a strength equal to or higher than S rank


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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 1:46 pm

Range is needed

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 1:47 pm

it is. . .35 radius

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 1:50 pm

So 70 meters in Diameter? I don't think that's allowed

Also I need a distance your allowed to travel if you use this for travel

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 1:51 pm

ah right I forgot how to math hold on

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 1:57 pm

fixed

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 2:01 pm

All they would need for Resist is Health B-rank or higher

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 2:02 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 2:07 pm

Approved Unless I missed something

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 3:29 pm

I'm assuming the stun and blindness duration is one post.

The teleportation thing, if you want this to teleport make it Ninjutsu/ Space-Time instead of just ninjutsu. It also needs a range for teleportation and a resist stat for unwilling targets. Not to mention this is only a B rank tech so I'd say either raise it to S rank or get rid of the teleportation.


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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 3:35 pm

It says B rank on the canon so I just copy and pasted that part there is a range for the teleportation on there and there is a resist for unwilling targets

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 3:44 pm

Sometimes we have to make the rank of the jutsu fit our site. Up it to S or lose the teleportation please. Also the resist states it's inly for the attack, stun or blindness but it doesn't saycfor teleportation. And lastly define which range is for teleportation please. I'm assuming it's the 45 meter one yes?
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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 3:48 pm

yes it says distance of travel next to it. Sorry I will make it more clear

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PostSubject: Re: Storm Release: Chakra Tornado   Fri Apr 17, 2015 4:15 pm

Re-Approved
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