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PostSubject: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Strands   Sat Apr 18, 2015 1:10 am

Name: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Strands
Rank: B Rank
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Duration/Cooldown: A post/ Has a 3 post cooldown
Range: Can travel up to 40 meters from the user.

Appearance: They Appear to be a lightning bolt, but before being plucked from the user's hair they are just normal pieces of their hair.
 

What it does:After using the Boar hand sign, the user rushes chakra to their hair, after so the hair is charged with lightning chakra, but stuck in the user’s hair. After plucking any amount of hair strands from their hair, ranging between 1 and 6, the user then throws the strands toward the enemy, at the point all strands have been released from the user’s hand the strands change form to lightning bolts. the size of a traditional katana, about 73 cm long. Flying toward the enemy. The attack reaches up to 15 meters around the user. It has a B rank speed



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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Strands   Sat Apr 18, 2015 10:30 am

This is too much for a B ranked jutsu.

If you want something to match your stat it's either gonna be a very limited jutsu or S or SS ranked.

The range is too far for a B rank that does this, but aside from that it just needs details.

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Strands   Sun Apr 19, 2015 2:06 am

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Strands   Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:23 pm

Add in a cool down and this can be approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Strands   Wed May 06, 2015 2:50 pm

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