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PostSubject: Vizard Mask-Half Mask: Red King's Pulse   Sun Apr 19, 2015 6:44 pm

Name: Red King's Pulse
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Hado Half Mask
Element: Gravity
Duration/Cooldown:Indefinite {active till user deactivate}/Total of posts it has been active + 2
Range:Self-35Meters-17.5Meter Radius

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What it does:
This move becomes active after Gunji uses the following incantation "Hero's final words,those will fall,Pulse. . ." When this incantation is said Gunji's Vizard mask will form around only half his face causing the other half of the face to be visible.  When the incantation is spoken Gunji will have a large amount of spiritual pressure added to his body in the hue of red, this spiritual pressure increases his Strength, Locomotive, Reactive Speed by one full rank each.  Because of the Spiritual pressure the user's strength is increased in the body itself. Because of this effect the user can easily break whatever he walks on through the pressure being used, a punch will send the pressure to be thrown at a target at the speed of B and strength of A. The user can Send off a blast releasing from the body, which is caused from deactivating the ability, of a 17.5meter radius which would have the same effect of strength at A the speed of the blast is B as well.  Because this ability is also self, a physical punch up close would be at A rank speed and A rank strength unless the user's strength stat is normally higher. This skill also has a passive ability where if caught in distance or radius of the pressure the target's speed decreases by 1 full rank.  This ability takes the equivalent of 1 C rank from the chakra capacity each time used in a post as well as an initial A rank for activation.  The resistance to avoid the pressure is to have strength equal to or higher than A, the resistance to avoid blast is to have strength equal to or higher than A, the resistance to avoid up close serious damage is to have Health equal to or higher than A rank.



Wordcount to learn: 4000
Bonus Requirements: Gunji Osaka-Kitsune Mask

Backstory:
This ability comes from the spiritual pressure given off by The Red King or Kitsune the demon of hell captured behind the mask.

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PostSubject: Re: Vizard Mask-Half Mask: Red King's Pulse   Mon Apr 20, 2015 6:24 pm

I want this to be looked over again by Roland, but for now....APPROVED
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PostSubject: Re: Vizard Mask-Half Mask: Red King's Pulse   Mon Apr 20, 2015 7:22 pm

Remove the strength as well part.

Lose Health(it's rare, and you also have a stat decrees for an A rank) as a buff and this will be perfectly fine imo.

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PostSubject: Re: Vizard Mask-Half Mask: Red King's Pulse   Mon Apr 20, 2015 7:30 pm

can you quote the part you wish for me to remove?

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PostSubject: Re: Vizard Mask-Half Mask: Red King's Pulse   Mon Apr 20, 2015 7:34 pm

Fixed

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PostSubject: Re: Vizard Mask-Half Mask: Red King's Pulse   Mon Apr 20, 2015 10:08 pm

Approved on watch

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