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 Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks

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Venus
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PostSubject: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyMon Apr 27, 2015 12:03 am

Name: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks
Rank: S
Jutsu Type: ninjutsu, kinjutsu  
Element: suiton
Duration/Cooldown: until deactivated or all sharks are destroyed/ number of posts active
Range: sharks can travel up to 50 meters away

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What it does: A much more powerful version of the Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks, the user touches a large surface of water such as an ocean, lake, or chakra formed body of water that is at least 20 meters deep and  creates one thousand sharks out of water that enter into a wall formation and rain down to attack the opponent, the speed of this formation is equal to the user's rank in kinjutsu. These sharks move at speeds equal to the rank of this jutsu plus one and their teeth have a biting strength equal to the rank of this jutsu minus one. The user can control these sharks via thought. Similarly to the technique it is based off of, the sharks can regenerate from damage via any surrounding water as long as they are not completely destroyed at the cost of a B rank amount of chakra per every 5 sharks regenerated, note that S ranking power or higher will completely destroy a shark. These sharks are roughly the size of adult great white sharks or around 10 feet long and four feet wide.



Wordcount to learn: 5000
Bonus Requirements: must claim on limited list, only two people should have this and their original first element must have been suiton. Must also do the kinjutsu mission for it and know water release: five feeding sharks.


Backstory: Kisame OP


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Enzeru The New Workaholic
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Character Name: Enzeru Metsuki
Clan: Metsuki/CLN
Element: Lightning

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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyMon Apr 27, 2015 11:49 pm

Unless any other Mod disapproves I see nothing wrong with this. Approved
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Kirito the Forest Sage
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Character Name: Kirito Senju
Clan: Senju
Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral

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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyTue Apr 28, 2015 2:13 am

As this is a kinjutsu, which it should be, this needs a corresponding kinjutsu mission to be made to get this jutsu and the requirement should say "complete the corresponding Kinjutsu mission" on top of what it already has.


Also, please give me a minimum amount of water needed for this technique instead of just saying "large body of water"
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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyTue Apr 28, 2015 2:14 am

I also forgot to note you should probably put in requirements that they have to know Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks first
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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyTue Apr 28, 2015 9:43 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyTue Apr 28, 2015 9:56 pm

Please give the rank of strength that can destroy the shark completely as you stated. "the sharks can regenerate from damage via any surrounding water as long as they are not completely destroyed"
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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyTue Apr 28, 2015 10:03 pm

I would assume S rank or higher would obliterate it
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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 7:50 pm

yea I thought that was obvious, but added it in for clarification
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PostSubject: Re: Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks   Water release: A Thousand Feeding Sharks EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 8:34 pm

Approved unless otherwise stated
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