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PostSubject: Gift of the Clear lake   Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:49 pm

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What it does: The user, once mastering the basic ability of manipulating water, can take their abilities to a new level and refine their chakra control to control the properties inside of water. Those who master this skill are believed to be born from the sea and have the passive ability to survive underwater. By manipulating of the molecular makeup in water the user is able to force them to expel oxygen and carry away carbon dioxide, similar to gills. This type of molecular manipulation on the make up of the molecules in water can only be used on bodies of water and only for the things mentioned above. Those with this skill are able to fight without any hindrance in water and swim at speeds equal to their locomotive speed plus one. Also as they have become one with water in all forms, the user does not need to use handseals for any water jutsu of A ranking or lower.

The main ability of this skill is to manipulate all forms of water like the previous form, along with the ability to manipulate the proprieties in water. The user can form water from anywhere, even air, at the speed of their reaction time. These constructs will have a strength, speed, and health equal to their chakra capacity stat capped at S ranking. This ability  comes with a few benefits. The user is able to infuse chakra into the properties of their water to speed up or slow down the random motion of atoms inside to manipulate the temperature of water. This gives their water constructs and other water techniques or jutsus an immunity to techniques that would freeze or evaporate them that have a power that is less than or equal to their chakra capacity rank as the user is able to influence and protect the equilibrium of water molecules from changing.

With this advanced control, the user is able to even take control of and manipulate someone's water ninjutsu to redirect it, as long as the user has a greater than or equal to ninjutsu/kinjutsu rank. This ability can also be used to affect advanced elements that have water as one of their compounds. The user can manipulate the combination of two elements, to have the water element break off from the combination and dissolve the advanced element. This will have a chakra cost equal to the rank of the technique being affect and can only work on advanced elemental jutsu that have water as one of their element compounds and that are at one rank lower than the user's chakra capacity stat.


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Chakra Cost: C rank for manipulation but in dragon force there is none
Bonus Requirements: Water DS  or be taught by the water DS and have mastered Water manipulation



Backstory: After mastering Dragon force Venus gained the ability to bring her skills with manipulating water to a new level.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Fri May 01, 2015 11:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Sun May 03, 2015 12:41 pm

2 dumps

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Sun May 03, 2015 12:47 pm

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The main ability of this skill is to manipulate all forms of water like the previous form, along with the ability to control the very base of water, its molecules.

No, it should be very obvious why I am saying this but absofuckinglutely not.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Sun May 03, 2015 1:06 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Sun May 03, 2015 2:48 pm

Still see mention of manipulating water molecules, if you specify that it is the molecular makeup of a body of water and the ability can only be used for swimming and breathing purposes then it would be fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Sun May 03, 2015 2:53 pm

edited it in at the bottom

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Sun May 03, 2015 2:58 pm

Cool but it's not what I asked for.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Sun May 03, 2015 3:05 pm

see if that's better then

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Mon May 04, 2015 2:00 pm

Denied, disrespect was shown here by bold face lying to the staff by saying this was "fixed" when nothing was in fact changed. This is grounds for removal of your Dragon Slayer status as well, consider this a first warning, should another issue like this arise. You will be stripped of water dragon slayer status.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Mon May 04, 2015 6:52 pm

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Name: Gift of the Clear Lake
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What it does: The user, once mastering the basic ability of manipulating water, can take their abilities to a new level and refine their chakra control to control the properties inside of water. Those who master this skill are believed to be born from the sea and have the passive ability to survive underwater. By manipulating water molecules in water the user is able to force them to expel oxygen and carry away carbon dioxide, similar to gills. This type of molecular manipulation can only be used on bodies of water and only for the things mentioned above. Those with this skill are able to fight without any hindrance in water and swim at speeds equal to their locomotive speed plus one. Also as they have become one with water in all forms, the user does not need to use handseals for any water jutsu of A ranking or lower.  

What the hell are you even talking about? Not only was this apparent "warning" completely and utterly random but it was also unnecessarily threatening. Your claim is based completely and utterly assumption, not even asking or seeing my point of view at all, and also is and was completely false. I edited the technique again after he posted and even talked to him about what he wanted me to do in the cb. To instantly jump onto this app and "warn" me without having a full grasp of the situation is an awful jump to a false conclusion and is an unnecessary attack on me personally. Honestly, a simple read over would have told you the edit, and stopped this unnecessary public display of incompetence. Not once was I  pmed or told that misunderstanding a comment or not editing to the ideal conditioned needed was considered a form of "disrespect" on ANY forum I have ever been on. Honestly a simple pm discussing your concern would have sufficed instead of turning this into an entirely public spectacle by posting on this technique for all to see. Not only am I being threatened with denial of the skill for this form of "disrespect" aka misunderstanding, but also a loss of position? That is a complete misuse of force on and over exaggeration of the situation. Please pm me after this if you want to continue this "warning" so we don't have to continue making this a public display for the other members. I am not only shocked but appalled at how this situation was handled and how I as a member was treated.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Mon May 04, 2015 7:00 pm

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so we don't have to continue making this a public display for the other members.

I did warn you to PM him as I wished to avoid this. However since you posted this, any point that you brought up in this is quite moot. This could and still can be smoothed out but NOT if this sort of hypocrisy and disrespect is continued.

Also his point is correct as this

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This type of molecular manipulation can only be used on bodies of water and only for the things mentioned above.

Is much different than what I asked, this;

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if you specify that it is the molecular makeup of a body of water

Manipulating the molecules themselves is not cool, manipulating the makeup of the molecules in the water such as the levels of each can be fine. If anything is misunderstood, PM me about it.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Tue May 05, 2015 11:47 pm

Your post made it seem like, to me, as if you were referring to molecular manipulation instead of just manipulating the make up of molecules, the two things appear to be quite similar as both are dealing with the same thing, one manipulating levels of molecules, and one manipulating the workings inside the molecular, essentially two different forms of manipulation but for the same subject and still both, to me, molecular manipulation. My apologies for not understanding what you wanted, though I will still not agree that my posts before were "disrespect" or "hypocrisy" nor am I the only one to blame as this should have been taken to pms to begin with. I have edited it again, if it is still not what you want please pm me or post here again.

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PostSubject: Re: Gift of the Clear lake   Wed May 06, 2015 12:39 pm

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If anything is misunderstood, PM me about it.

Simply put you cannot follow orders, your Water DS status is now withdrawn.

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