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 Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu

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PostSubject: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu   Wed Apr 29, 2015 10:53 pm

Name: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu
Rank: S
Jutsu Type: Space-time/Kenjutsu
Element: -
Duration/Cooldown: 1 post/1 post
Range:5 meters

Appearance: -
 

What it does: The user attacks an object with his/her sword, slashing or thrusting etc. Seiryuu teleports this attack through a single object (including the ground), and the force of the attack is sent from the receiving surface. So if Kozai slashes a wall, he can use this technique to teleport his slash through the wall to slash a dumpster touching the same wall. This must be done with a sword, and can only teleport as far as the jutsu’s range. This jutsu’s chakra cost is equal to the rank of the attack + 1 rank.



Wordcount to learn: 4000
Bonus Requirements:
Kozai Rinku or learn from him.

Backstory: The labyrinthine rocks were crawling with little tiny insects… fast ones. Kozai developed this technique to cut them down without touching them.


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Character Name: Kikato Rinku
Clan: Otsutsuki
Element: Earth,Wind,Lightning,Sand,Glass

PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu   Thu Apr 30, 2015 3:38 pm

The user is attacks an object with his/her sword, slashing or thrusting etc. Seiryuu teleports this attack through a single object (including the ground), and the force of the attack is sent from the receiving surface. This must be done with a sword, and can only teleport as far as the jutsu’s range. This jutsu’s chakra cost is equal to the rank of the attack + 1 rank.

So can you clear this up for me, the first sentence makes no sense, second Sentence, needs Clearity

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu   Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:27 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu   Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:36 pm

Umm Not at a range of 20 meters 5 at most im thinking for this

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu   Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:37 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Seiryuu   Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:38 pm

Alright I find this acceptable like this

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