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PostSubject: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Sun May 03, 2015 6:44 am

Name: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku
Rank: S
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu/Medical/Space-Time
Element: -
Duration/Cooldown: 4 posts/posts used + 2
Range: Sword

Appearance: A large red aura of chakra around the sword, about 3 inches around the blade.
 

What it does: The user makes a thrust with his sword, and a red aura comes forth from the blade, shooting out with S-rank speed and power. The aura itself is not solid, being intangible. However, on contact with a living being, it teleports some of the victim’s chakra into itself (B-rank per post of contact with the victim). By the end of its duration, if it has absorbed 6 B-ranks of power from total victims, then its cooldown is reset and the jutsu may be cast again. The user cannot use this jutsu on himself. If the user throws the weapon, the aura still remains around the weapon for the duration of the jutsu.



Wordcount to learn: 4000
Bonus Requirements:
- Know Mizuchi
- Kozai Rinku or learn from

Backstory: Kozai was inspired by tales of Suzaku, the phoenix, so he created a similar jutsu that would die and be reborn under set conditions.


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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Sun May 03, 2015 9:50 am

Lets lower this Drain to B-rank, and Whats up with the 25 meters when this is a Touch Based effect, That Aura's Range needs to be cut back, I think 3 should still be good, But Ill talk this over with Roland, Cause I think Draining Chakra was a Medical thing, Hyuuga being the Exception

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Sun May 03, 2015 12:29 pm

So it drains 6 A ranks in 4 posts?

As my esteemed colleague says, lower those to B, next lower those to four, next add medical and this jutsu actually ain't too bad at all!

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Sun May 03, 2015 10:46 pm

Clarified and edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Sun May 03, 2015 11:47 pm

Ah I still see it at six, not four.

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Mon May 04, 2015 1:26 am

Wait, so... you want to make my jutsu even stronger than it is? Decreasing the amount it needs to absorb is a bit unbalanced, I feel.
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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Mon May 04, 2015 12:34 pm

Okay then I was reading this wrong and it needs far more details, how can it even drain in the first place then? I was concerned it could drain up to that many in the uneven post turn.


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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Tue May 05, 2015 8:21 am

Yeah, as I have it worded, it drains a B-rank per post of contact with EACH victim. So, if I manage to somehow hit two people with it per post, it drains 2 B-ranks.
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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Tue May 05, 2015 11:15 am

And it's range is three meters?

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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Tue May 05, 2015 1:20 pm

Must've been high, edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Wed May 06, 2015 9:20 pm

Bump!
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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Fri May 08, 2015 8:20 am

Buuump
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PostSubject: Re: Mumyo Jinpu Ryuu Ougi: Suzaku   Fri May 08, 2015 11:21 am

Make sure to sign up in the Limited thread.

Approved.

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