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PostSubject: Seal tags transcription    Sat May 09, 2015 1:10 pm

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What it does: Combining fuinjutsu with paper ninjutsu, the user has learned to use their paper as a medium for placing seals on things. The user can place any seal on any piece of paper created from their chakra without the need for contact and simply through their chakra alone. The seals place on the paper will not become visible until activated. When activating a fuinjutsu on a piece of their paper the seal for the fuinjutsu will re-appear and be placed on anything the paper is contact with at that time. Only a max of two seals can be placed on a target in a post, but there is not set number for the amount of seals that be placed on pieces of paper as long as the cost can be paid.
Wordcount: 2000
Chakra Cost: Cost of placing a seal on the paper is equal to the rank of the fuinjutsu, cost of remotely activating the fuinjutsu is C rank.
Bonus Requirements: Must have dance of the shikigami and learn from or be Venus uzumaki.



Backstory: Venus's mother created this technique long ago when first starting out a ninja to combine her uzumaki heritage for sealing with her unique ability with paper ninjutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Seal tags transcription    Sat May 09, 2015 3:02 pm

This should be a jutsu not a skill, that is also too low of a word count

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PostSubject: Re: Seal tags transcription    Sat May 09, 2015 3:02 pm

. The seals place on the paper will not become visible until activated and the chakra of the seal will also be suppressed, making it impossible to know there is a seal on the paper until it is activated.

That is a no no


For the chakra cost on activating the Fuinjutsu at least A from all the paper

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PostSubject: Re: Seal tags transcription    Sat May 09, 2015 3:03 pm

"When activating a fuinjutsu on a piece of their paper the seal for the fuinjutsu will re-appear and be placed on anything the paper is contact with at that time."

So... you can place your seals via paper on ANYTHING that the paper is touching? No, sorry.
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PostSubject: Re: Seal tags transcription    Sat May 09, 2015 3:03 pm

the user can place any seal onto any piece of paper made from their chakra without contact. I don't like that
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PostSubject: Re: Seal tags transcription    Sun May 17, 2015 2:40 am

Take out the "the chakra of the seal will also be suppressed," part for me.

Make remotely activating the seal cost C rank instead of D

give me something like "only two seals can be placed on a target per post but the amount of seals that can be placed on paper is as may as you can pay the chakra cost for"


Disregard all earlier notes on this. Alice I want to work on this with you and get it approvable and make it so you still like it. I don't like that you feel as if you can't make things on this site anymore and would like to do what I can to fix that if you let me<3
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PostSubject: Re: Seal tags transcription    Tue May 19, 2015 12:21 am

Thank you Kirito for being concerned and be considerate and trying to help me with this skill instead of just "ripping it apart." I am grateful for your kindness and understanding and have done all the edits.

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PostSubject: Re: Seal tags transcription    Tue May 19, 2015 12:28 am

Alright, this is approved but on watch so don't abuse it
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