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PostSubject: Quetsiqquaddol   Wed May 13, 2015 4:40 pm

Name: Questsiqquaddol
Age: 1,000
Birthday: March 25
Gender: Male


Appearance: Questsiqquadol has multiple forms but has three main ones that he takes on. He is a triune being composed of three main different beings fused into one, and therefore the first three are based off of each separate person; with the fourth being the combination of them all.




Quetsiquaddol - His normal form, which is combination of all of them, is exactly that. He has a strong, masculine face with a strange aura of beauty about him. His eye large, intense, yet strangely pure and innocent. His muscles are defined only in major places, and he has such density that it is, again, clear that he is not made of flesh, bone and blood. He has no veins, nor does his skin show sign of a differene in coloration. He is a tan skinned, with glowing and glittering countenance. His eyes are rainbow colored, and his hair varies, as always, in color and length. Put all images together and he is the compilation. He appears mostly like Hawwah at base, but can seen to have Helel’s and Zod’s features in the face and general countenance/stance.

The aura of Q in his fused form is daunting to say the least, and he appears to be something clearly out of this world. But I will not waste words in describing him further, as he is able to transform and appear in so many different combination of ways that he can only be described as indescribable. His truest form is quite literally that, and therefore he will at best use a daunting form that humans can and do understand in order to conceal himself.

Personality: Quetsiquaddol is a quite serious and composed individual, having an unusual emotional consistency to him for the most part. His emotional pattern is a combination of his three parts, which combine to make him capable of exploring a wide spectrum of emotion. Helel is by far the most emotional and most capable of emotion, making him the major cause of extremities in mood and feeling in Quetsiquaddol. Zod is stoic and virtually without feeling at all, therefore making him the major part of the logical and methodical abilities of Q. Hawwah is mainly compassionate and kind, having sternness, but a very tempered manner about him, and that can be used to describe Q on the surface.

Ideology Quetsiqquaddol is a being of a different nature than that of human beings, and therefore parts of his personality most definitely take on a different tone than that of mortals. Firstly, he is a virtually unchanging being, opposite of humans. He is never mastered by his emotions, and therefore does not experience the same undulation in feeling that people do. His beliefs are based on the spiritualism on his world(s) that tie into each other as well as tie into beliefs concerning the universe as a whole.

It is believed among his people, the Annanuki, that there is a single deity that is responsible for all created things. They have vast libraries, relics, and the like that correlate to their spiritual beliefs, which they believe to be the most accurate in all realities, worlds and dimentions etc.

On his world, Quetsiquaddol is worshipped as a sovreign, a king, and a deity. And therefore, ironically, he is a part of his own spiritual beliefs, though he does not believe himself to be the supreme being, he is an avid worshipper. The Annanuki believe in a divine law, that has precepts and principles to be applied to any and all worlds and that it is divine in origin; flawless in nature. They are the sole holders of it and are a world of priests in essence, with Q being the supreme leader.

He is marked by his spiritual beliefs and code of ethics and quite black and white in regards to them. As the spiritual leader on his world, he knows and understands more of the Qabballah (their holy law), than any other being.
He believes that goodness and righteousness are concepts that have intrinsic value and are existent on all worlds. Therefore all beings are judged by them and ultimately answerable to them. His judgements therefore, are based on extremely firm and compelling convictions.

Goal
His main belief and goal is to ascend into the tenth dimension, the dimension right past his which is Eternity. As he states, he desires to ascend to the highest of heavens and be like the most high. Every action he takes is to further him along this goal, and he sees this as his purpose and destiny. It is a secret to many that this is his true aim, but ultimately it is. And it is an obsession that fuels all that he does ultimately as he believes, according to the Qaballah, that it is his destiny.

To accomplish this, he is willing to do whatever necessary in so far as it does not transgress the sacred law. He has labeled out multiple things necessary, he believes for him to do and have in order to make his dream a reality, and is in pursuit of them at every waking moment. Many other monks and spiritualists throughout the dimensions seek him for enlightenment as he is in the highest realm and considered to be a pioneer in spirituality.

Attitude towards other races Quetsiqqauddol is not haughty or arrogant to other races, even minor ones. He humbles himself to learn and observe even from the most primitive. This is one of his greatest strengths in character. He is also a strong believer in a species' capacity to change and to evolve in a positive way. He also strongly believes in his capacity to lead a race in this direction.


History: Quetsiqquaddol is the sovereign of a people called the Annanuki. He is the founder and father of this people, and is a being they regard as a king, priest, and even a deity. The annanuki believe that the universe is in the shape of an enormous tree. Each branch atop that tree is a dimensional level. On each dimension, there are various galaxies, smaller dimensions etc. There are ten total, with the tenth being the Eternal, and the closest a dimension is to the Tenth, the greater it is said to be in terms of power, knowledge and overall advancement. The Annanuki reside in the ninth dimension, on a world called Arda. Their sun, called Enya, and a moon called Furya.

Questsiqquaddol established the Annanuki under his sole rule a time ago and set them up as the supreme race of their dimension, as well as a kingdom that is seen as a heaven-like sanctuary among the stars. Before Quetsiqquaddol reigned as sovreign, there were three peoples that resided upon the three luminaries (Arda, Enya, Furya). Each collaborating together to have peace and safety among their people as well as advancement in all culture, art, science, and spirituality. Each had their own king, world, way of life, and beliefs. Over time, they began to come together more and more in unity and in synchronicity. Sometime during the middle age of their existence, the three kings gathered together to discuss matters of prophecy and of the future. Each having their own separate vision, goal, and dream for their people and way of life. After consulting many wise spiritualist on other worlds, they came together to agreement that they ought to perform an ancient and forbidden ritual, that is said to be a secret only held in Eternity. They fused together into a triune entity. They, for many reasons, saw this as prophetic, and plausible for each to reach their goals ultimately, as well as bind in perfect unity with their peoples.
In this grand fusion, which was hailed by each people group, there came to be a complete unity and fusion of their peoples, culture, and everything else. What was three was now one. What were three kings was now one god. What was three people, were now one people. And they lived and grew in collaboration, their sovereign and priest continuing to establish peace and power in all areas of their land.

Age of Exploration
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Currently, the Sovreign sits upon his throne conducting missions into outer space to searching for relics and ancient books that he believes will tell him the greatest truths of the universe.

Q lives on a world where, because of the nature of the planet, people do not age. Meaning that they do not show signs of aging past the age of 21. All Annanuki are youthful and young, showing no signs of slowing down. This trait has aided him in his unwavering searching, studying, and even fighting for the entirety of his existence. And he continues with that veracity to an even greater degree now...

Likes: Life, Nature, righteousness as he defines it, light, mercy, truth, humility, reverence, holiness,
Dislikes: Shinigami, worshipers of shinigami, wickedness according to his law, arrogance, haughtiness, lies, mercilessness, unnecessary bloodshed, and irreverence.  



Ninja Traits



Rank: B
Village: Kiri
Element(s): Water
Clan: Annanuki
Bijuu Request: N/A



Stats

(B)Physical:

(B)-Strength- Power of physical attacks, how much they can lift and how much they can understandably carry.
(C)-Locomotive Speed- Used to determine how fast someone can attack, run or throw.
(C)-Reaction Speed- Used to determine how they react to attacks, movement of limbs in a stationary position and such.
(B)-Health- Used to determine how many hits one can take.

(C)Mental:

(C)-Thought Speed- Used to determine the speed of the user's thought, this is like reaction but for planning.
(C)-Jutsu Knowledge- Used to determine how many highest rank jutsu you can use (Rank above you)
(E)-Willpower- Used to resist mental attacks/effects
(E)-Mental Sharpness- Used to determine power of mental attacks/effects

(B)Chakra:

(B)-Chakra Capacity- Used to determine how many jutsus user can cast
(C)-Sealing and Spacial/Time- Used to determine how fast jutsus of this kind are activated/speed/power.
(C)-Medical and Physical Enhancement-
(B)-Ninjutsu and Kinjutsu-
(C)-Poisons and Puppetry-

This is an example of D rank or Genin starting stats. For more information you can check the Stat Rules.



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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Wed May 13, 2015 4:48 pm

First off NO!

You can not start off at S rank Genin only last High spot is closed

YOU ARE NOT AN ANGEL!

Galaxy release is not a thing here

Vouch or not must write a rp sample

you must have an age

you must have a gender

you must have a birth

you can not have that many appearances

DENIED ABSOLUTELY NOT NO NO NO NO!
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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Wed May 13, 2015 6:54 pm

First time I literally saw someone try to make the star of the morning as their character.

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Wed May 13, 2015 9:05 pm

*Sigh*

I knew this would be controversial and misunderstood. Let me (respectfully) make a few points and clear up a few things. I can tell you did not actually read my story but just saw MORNING STAR and my profile pic.

1. My character is not a literal angel. He is not infinite. He is not Eternal. He is not Omnipotent, omniscient, or omnipresent. The story is told in the form of a myth, the actual facts I wanted to be a mystery unfolded IC. So it makes it seem more dramatic and simple than it really is.

I repeat... HE IS NOT LITERALLY HELEL THE MORNING STAR.

2. Yes, one of my characters halves if a mimick of the angel Helel, but not literally him OF COURSE. He is not the Helel of the bible. He is not a divine being, but is seen as that by minor races. Like Thor is seen as the "god of thunder" but is really just another asgardian. He had a birth, but is immortal. Meaning he does not age, and was born so long ago that putting a birth is essentially useless. He is not unkillable, he simply does not age.

3. I'm not sure why you are coming at me so aggressively over the gender and birthday. I did not put "N/A" because my character is literally god. I put it because it was irrelvant to him because he is not a human, and is ageless. I edited that however.

4. I am not writing an rp sample NPC. I mean no disrespect, but I have come across maybe two apps with one and though I do not claim to be the king of rp by any means -  I'm not a newb. I have no need to write out an rp sample to see if I know the rules of the game. Pls bro. And you are putting me at genin so there is no incentive to show off any amazing rp skils when I begin at the lowest level either way.

And btw, real talk. If you think that I should not be S rank because of skill level PLEASE allow me to fight you or one of your sanin in a PF for the rank. Since I do not have a char yet I will use a canon character or whatever. Let me know. If it because of the system of rank or whatever - than I will comply and be D rank of course. But if for some other reason that you feel I need to be tested to "prove" myself, I'd gladly oblige. Let me know.

5. Idk what you mean by appearances. But my character has existed for billions of years. He is immortal and was born on another world. Again, that does not make him literally god, but it does mean he has... experience.

If you mean in terms of my description of his appearance... Areyouserious. Firstly, that tells me you did not read my story to know why I put in three appearances. Secondly... does it even matter that much bro...

6. Galaxy release is his unique KKG that I will be making. You may already be preparing your DENIED stamp for when I post it, but please let me at least make it before you deny it. Thx.

7. I put him at D rank and will adjust his stats accordingly, no problem. I do not mind working my way up to S rank. I did not know you had slots for ranks and even still, I thought that as a wanderer and outsider, it would be possible for me to have a higher rank since I do not have the advantages of being in a village and it is so difficult to rank up. But if not than I will comply.

8. Before I get a long message of rebuttal about how OP my char is, let me make this last appeal. Firstly, my character is not a literal "god". Again, the story was told in the form of a myth so it is purposely more mythical. Let me explain so more bare facts so that I do not get the "YOUR CHARACTER IS NOT AN ANGEL" again.

My theme with my character is unique and mythical but on par with power levels in modern naruto time. He is fashioned largely after an "angelic" theme, but at the end of the day he is an alien that was created, and that can and possibly will die/be killed.

Not to be a nit picker, but just to put things in persepctive, we are dealing with beings in the naruto universe that quite literally could be gods, demons or angels in terms of power level. There are several people on this site that can travel to different dimensions, send meteors from the sky, control nature, and (my favourite) resurrect the dead. I assure you I will not be topping that with my char. He will be strong (of course), he will be op (of course), but I did not literally try and make AN ANGEL or a DEMON my character. He is just based off of the theme and appears that way. Introducing an alien to the mix will not stir up anything that was not already here, such as beings that can destroy entire planets by themselves if allowed I.E. rinnegan.

I would appreciate if someone would look at my app again now that I have edited and hopefully explained some things. If you have questions or objections, feel free.
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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Wed May 13, 2015 9:16 pm

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I am not writing an rp sample NPC. I mean no disrespect, but I have come across maybe two apps with one and though I do not claim to be the king of rp by any means - I'm not a newb. I have no need to write out an rp sample to see if I know the rules of the game. Pls bro. And you are putting me at genin so there is no incentive to show off any amazing rp skils when I begin at the lowest level either way.
Then expect not to have your account approved

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Idk what you mean by appearances. But my character has existed for billions of years. He is immortal and was born on another world. Again, that does not make him literally god, but it does mean he has... experience.
Can't be immortal thus can't have that many appearances

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6. Galaxy release is his unique KKG that I will be making. You may already be preparing your DENIED stamp for when I post it, but please let me at least make it before you deny it. Thx.
Read the rules clans and bloodlines need to be made first

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7. I put him at D rank and will adjust his stats accordingly, no problem. I do not mind working my way up to S rank. I did not know you had slots for ranks and even still, I thought that as a wanderer and outsider, it would be possible for me to have a higher rank since I do not have the advantages of being in a village and it is so difficult to rank up. But if not than I will comply.
Wanderer is not open and all new users start at genin again read the rules

SO after looking at your app again, guess what? yup DENIED!

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Thu May 14, 2015 10:04 am

Kitaro, all I am saying is read the rules and then get back to it. Follow the rules or I can't have you here man. I'd love for you to be here but hell this almost feels like a Gambit app, and that's not good. I appreciate what you're trying to do though I wish you woulda went the other way around it. So looks like you'll need a clan and a KKG at least before this becomes viable. Not that I will allow such things as living since near the dawn of time but hell we may very well visit that in the Non-PvP rp and you are more than welcome to join.

Nah I said it because I figure if Lucifer himself wanted to rp, this is the kinda app he would make. More of a joke than saying you cannot be it. Though naturally only one immortality is allowed on the site, and naturally I won't allow a three-in-one, not only is it blasphemous but frankly you should get the same as everyone else man.

Galaxy release had just too many things man, you're better than that and smarter than that I know it. I've seen it. Hell your response shows it, so let's pick one that you can do not try and make something more OP than what the limiteds are.

Real talk, you want cool shit and stuff I know, so heres what Imma tell ya.

Add me on Skype: RolandOotsusuki

You can start as a spec jounin, I'll vouch for your skill at that. And if you join Kiri, and apply for one of it's positions I'll rank you to S if ya pass the test. (Which I'm certain you will)

Also no rinnegan aint destroyin the world and you know it old bud.

The only last thing I'll put here is...

Wanna roll for a bijuu?

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Thu May 14, 2015 10:51 am

I'll add you on skype and we can talk.
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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 12:13 am

Bump.

Blaine or Toshi (or both) please check this. Made major edits to everything, and took out crap from history to make it sweet and simple.

P.S. Blaine offered me S rank position to join Kiri I believe, that is why I asked for that rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 1:10 am

Ahem, All staff, especially admin are allowed to assess this app so long as they are polite about it so here goes nothing.  -puts on head phones to read app completely while listening to jet set radio-

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All I am asking for you to do here is simply put an age here, all apps require an age I only ask that you do the same please and thank you.

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Questsiqquadol has multiple forms but has three main ones that he takes on. He is a triune being composed of three main different beings fused into one, and therefore the first three are based off of each separate person; with the fourth being the combination of them all.

Helel - The first person in the trinity, a being of incomparable beauty. Helel has long flowing hair that ranges in color depending upon his choice (though usually black or red) and has a strong, muscular stature with a slender build. His face is perfectly symmetrical making him stand out as awkwardly attractive by human standards, and has both masculine and feminine features. His gender is clearly male dominant, however he is comprised of a elegance associated mostly with females.

His skin glitters, glows and radiates, making him appear as though he is a humanoid star, and his skin is flawless to the point where it lacks any sense of temporality, mortality, of flaw. He can clearly be noticed to be “otherworldly” in appearance. His face is very much child like, with soft features that show no signs of wear or aging. His eyes are very large, and his glare disturbingly intense. If one were to look straight at him it would be as though looking into the face of god. His eyes almost appear to be looking through you. His cheeks are quite rosy with a small pointed nose extending past his lip line. His lips, full yet slender, cover over a more than full set of perfectly white “teeth”. They look more like perfectly shaped stones or crystals as they are very large, dense, and again - symmetrical. One would be awe-struck and put on guard by such a beautiful and strange smile. He has dimples on both sides of his face when he smiles, though his eyes never seem to change expression. He looks at everyone as though he is in-love and yet at the same time as though they are his next meal. His ears are pointy like that of an elv, and extend back into his luxurious hair. They are no creases, folds, or bends in his body. He dos not show the musculature of a human being nor show the signs of having the same physical makeup of them. He appears to be completely solid in fact, with only a few signs of muscular curvature around the bicep, chest, back and shoulder area. He appears strangely dense nad manakin like, unlike that of a human body, making his weight and size difficult to interpret. He, at will, can and will manifest several wings at his back that vary in shape and appearance, and quantity.

More often than not, he is naked. Covered only by the rainbow colored aura and flame of light that he surrounds himself with at all times. However, while dwelling among humans he will be found to wear only white or black robes and garments, giving him an even further mysterious look.

In summary, Helel’s appearance is that of the most gorgeous creature anyone can truly conceive. Beyond the human concept of “attractive” or “good looking” he is truly beautiful. A dynamic and terrifying fact of nature, as when one looks at the cosmos, a great ocean, waterfall, or even the sunrise. There is something permanent and god-like about him that is distinguishable instantly. In terms of purity and beauty, he has no comparison known in any world.

Helel 1

Helel 2


Exyzodia - The second being of the trinity, called Zod for short, is a much different appearing being than Helel. While Helel has the likeness of a deity and an archangel, Zod is more of what a human would call “alien”. He is a grey, humanoid looking being with similar strange level of consistency in skin color and daunting appearance. He is purely a masculine, machine-like figure of great power. Standing normally 9 feet tall, he puts himself at 7ft while on earth.  His shoulders and chest are wide and strong, and he, like Helel, has a mucularature that is carved in. So that his muscles are not human-like but rather like that of a statue.

He looks eerily human, sharing the same basic facial characteristics, but having signs of inhumanity such as in his eyes. His eyes have no iris but are completely colored with an array of blue, purple, black, and even gold that mix together to look as though his eyes were small portraits of a galaxy swirling about.

His muscles and body are clearly more dense than any human being could possibly be, and he is of a stature of 7 feet. He is not fat or flabby in any sense of the word, yet is clearly built like  tank or machine, his weight difficult to calculate.

Lastly, the choleric being has a mark on the palms of each of his monstrous hands that are in the likeness of the Dark Release symbols.


Zod 1

Zod 2

Zod 3

Zod 4


Hawwah -  Lastly, the third person of the trinity. He is a being more like that of a human than the other two. His skin tone is tan, like that of a native american. He is titanic is size, being shredded from head to toe in musculature and physique. Like the rest, he too has large eyes, this time forest green with enlarged irises. His wingspan is over 12 feet and his hands are large enough to squeeze the air out of a basketball with one hand, able to wrap his hand completely around it.

Usually found with black or cherry red hair, he varies from long or short hair depending on preference. In terms of physique however, he, like his predecessors, is other worldly. His strange level of physical density is even more present as he is larger than both Helel and Zod. Almost animal like in appearance because of this. And he is of 10 feet in height normally, though he puts himself at 6’8 while on earth mostly.



Quetsiquaddol - His normal form, which is combination of all of them, is exactly that. He has a strong, masculine face with a strange aura of beauty about him. His eye large, intense, yet strangely pure and innocent. His muscles are defined only in major places, and he has such density that it is, again, clear that he is not made of flesh, bone and blood. He has no veins, nor does his skin show sign of a differene in coloration. He is a tan skinned, with glowing and glittering countenance. His eyes are rainbow colored, and his hair varies, as always, in color and length. Put all images together and he is the compilation. He appears mostly like Hawwah at base, but can seen to have Helel’s and Zod’s features in the face and general countenance/stance.

The aura of Q in his fused form is daunting to say the least, and he appears to be something clearly out of this world. But I will not waste words in describing him further, as he is able to transform and appear in so many different combination of ways that he can only be described as indescribable. His truest form is quite literally that, and therefore he will at best use a daunting form that humans can and do understand in order to conceal himself.

After various discussions with Roland we can not approve of this many appearances you may pick one and register the other forms as a form of jutsu I imagine this is a clan trait, also please be clear as to how the forms take change and what not, please and thank you.

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Rank: S

You were promised a promotion to S rank yes but it must be done in character so for now please fix this to be B rank.

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Element(s): Earth, Water, Fire, Mako Release, Numinous release, Zohar release

First off I would like to point out neither Mako, Numinous, or Zohar release have been made as such these would need to be made first.

Furthermore I will quote a rule of this site so that it may help on this issue.

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- At maximum, you can only have three basic elements, any number of clan/advanced element, and a bijuu element unless a Bloodline or other technique states otherwise. You start with your first basic element free. For additional elements you must write 1,000 words learning the second element and 2,000 words learning the third. You may be taught an element by another player if they know it themselves. If learning about elements from them, you only need to do 1/2 the words required. When training for an advanced element you must have already learned the elements that make it. To train your advanced element it will cost 600 words. You start with your first element. You are allowed to have your 2nd basic element at Chuunin rank and you are allowed your 3rd basic element at Special-Jounin rank. Once you learn an element it is set in stone due to being part of your chakra network, so pick carefully.

With this in mind you are only allowed to start off with one basic element and worth forth to gain the other basic elements. Please pick one between the five basic elements, please and thank you.

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I ask that you provide proof of vouching please and thank you.

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 1:20 am

No need for proof and what he means is, the three appearances are fine if it works as a jutsu or if you detail in your clan that it is a clan trait and make sure to outline how the appearances shift, when, how, etc

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 8:40 pm

Proper edits made.
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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:02 pm

Your rank still says S rank, you still have all those appearances on there I had asked for you to please make those forms jutsu and clan related please, also I am not sure we can allow that age. Finally Ea-Release is not a basic element that one can pick.

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:08 pm

It will be added to my clan. Ea release is my bl element but ok.
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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:10 pm

You still have all those appearances there, mate. Also Ea-release would be an element you would have to get on your own. Those are the rules of the site unfortunately I am sorry

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:23 pm

Kohei.

I am not removing the apperances as the are purely description. I said I will make the transformations jutsus if need be, however they are simply descriptions of the three people my char is made of in their singular forms. That is all. It does not do anything. My clan page will be updated to include and explain etc. if necessary.

I put Water release as my element...
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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:25 pm

Eversoris, I understand that but the appearances will be description for those fields and not for these I have been told myself to not allow those appearances on this app. I am sorry but I am going to have to ask you again to please comply. I am trying to be nice about this my friend.

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:33 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:35 pm

still iffy on the age, so I will consult another staff on the matter, but thank you for listening man. I appreciate you are working well to help make this situation better.

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PostSubject: Re: Quetsiqquaddol   Sat May 16, 2015 9:45 pm

Ok thank you.
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