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 Curse of Regrets: Curse of Happiness-Infection

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PostSubject: Curse of Regrets: Curse of Happiness-Infection   Thu May 14, 2015 1:53 am

Name: Curse of Regrets: Curse of Happiness-Infection
Rank: SS
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Duration/Cooldown:7/20
Range:60m

Appearance:
The appearance of the first part of the jutsu is seen as user spitting out a chakra senbon that is thin enough to be nearly invisible to the eye. The second part is an invisible balloon forming from chakra absorption and finally the last form is a creature of darkness larger than the target with large teeth that happens to also be invisible of which consumes the target.
 

What it does:
This jutsu allows user to spit out a chakra like senbon that is nerely visible to the target's eye unless they have a doujutsu to see the senbon.  The senbon is sent out at S rank speed with SS. The user can avoid the whole effects to the jutsu if they have strength equal to or higher than SS rank if not then the jutsu moves on to the second phase which forms an invisible thread around the senbon that starts to drain the targets chakra equal to the rank of strength the balloon that is being inflated is at.  Note that the balloon and thread are invisible to those who don't have a doujutsu. The Balloon also gains strength every post


  • 1st post if successful=D rank Strength=D-rank Chakra capacity Drain

  • 2nd post=C rank Strength=C-rank Chakra capacity Drain

  • 3rd post=B rank Strength=B-rank Chakra capacity Drain

  • 4th post=A rank Strength=A-rank Chakra capacity Drain

  • 5th post=S rank Strength=S-rank Chakra capacity Drain

  • 6th post=SS rank Strength=SS-Rank Chakra capacity Drain


Note in order to avoid 2-7 posts the user needs to have equal to or higher than SS rank Will Power to break out of the balloon's grasp. The reason why it is SS rank Will power and higher is because it is reinforced by SS rank chakra that was used in the beginning to form the senbon. This is just the Infection part of the jutsu. This jutsu has two parts the second part will be registered as well.

Laws for this Jutsu:


  • This only uses the additional SS rank chakra to activate for the senbon of which the targets chakra fuels for the remaining posts.

  • If the user is killed the beast will breath out immaturely at what ever strength the balloon was at and attempt to fight the target as a last attempt.

  • This does not work on clones.

  • Those with a doujutsu eyes can simply cut the thread prematurely to avoid the strength amplification from the beast. Or they could dodge the senbon to you know. Chakra sensory helps with the senbon as well but not the balloon as it is the target's own chakra.

  • If Target doesn't know that balloon is inflating they will still know their chakra is being drained but have no idea about the balloon.

  • If the target is a bijuu user the creature will only have 1 rank lower of strength in it's final form or premature form as opposed to a normal target

  • This is not a genjutsu.

  • You can over charge the creature which will kill it entirely if you use sage mode.


Wordcount to learn: 5000
Bonus Requirements: :Learn from Kohei

Backstory:
This jutsu was created by a little girl named Toya. She came up with this jutsu after her father and mother took her to a village fair and attempted a group suicide.  Toya however lived but she thought that death was happiness, thus she wanted to spread happiness all around thus making this jutsu to help spread it.  Later on she would find out death was no happiness as someone with a copycat jutsu style copied this jutsu and killed her without her knowing. What a shame.

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PostSubject: Re: Curse of Regrets: Curse of Happiness-Infection   Thu May 14, 2015 9:31 am

Shouldnt be X rank for any jutsu descriptions ever,

does way too much,

Change this A LOT or I will move it to the denied as an example.

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PostSubject: Re: Curse of Regrets: Curse of Happiness-Infection   Thu May 14, 2015 1:01 pm

I fixed it, I plan to make it a two part jutsu I will register the second part

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PostSubject: Re: Curse of Regrets: Curse of Happiness-Infection   Thu May 14, 2015 3:01 pm

Okay have Zento cut his teeth on this when you are finished.

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