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PostSubject: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Thu May 14, 2015 8:54 am

Name: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar
Rank: SS
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Duration/Cooldown:Chart
Range:Contact

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What it does: This is a reverse heel palm SS-rank power Soul Menace attack. Upon contact, however, the user's soul wavelength and chakra insert doton element chakra into the opponent's body, which over the course of three posts, converts the victim's body to stone, petrifying them (yeah, this is death). The victim is able to heal himself through this period if he has regenerative abilities of at least SS rank. Resist for total petrification is A health. If the victim has S health, the user's Su-Chi-Ar attack only petrifies the organ which they are attacking. SS-rank health renders the victim immune to all petrification.



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- Have Soul Menace
- Kozai or learn from him
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PostSubject: Re: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Thu May 14, 2015 11:13 am

Bump those resists down a rank. Also how does one heal themselves during the three posts?

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PostSubject: Re: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Thu May 14, 2015 11:16 am

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PostSubject: Re: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Thu May 14, 2015 11:43 am

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If the victim has S health, the user's Su-Chi-Ar attack only petrifies the organ which they are attacking. S-rank health renders the victim immune to all petrification.


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PostSubject: Re: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Mon May 18, 2015 8:21 am

Er.... what questions?
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PostSubject: Re: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Mon May 18, 2015 12:49 pm

Are they immune or does it petrify an organ is the obvious one?

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PostSubject: Re: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Thu May 21, 2015 8:44 am

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PostSubject: Re: Soul Menace: Su-Chi-Ar   Thu May 21, 2015 9:45 am

Alrighty my problems are gone, have someone else go over this though approved 1/2

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