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PostSubject: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Thu May 14, 2015 11:01 am

Name: Taisen
Rank: A
Jutsu Type: Zanpakutou
Element: -
Duration/Cooldown:
Range: 15 meter radius

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What it does: The user releases his zanpakutou with the phrase “Sever, Taisen”. Rather than the user being in partnership with the sword, the user’s sheer power dominates the zanpakutou, forcing it to release its power as an act of violation.
As a result, this can be used when the sword is even partially unsheathed. Upon activation, the sword releases a translucent bubble from it, much like a barrier (but things can move through it). The bubble is centered on the user, and moves as he moves. The barrier has a radius equal to the range.
Within this barrier, the user can create slashes, the width of which are about an inch, and can are fired from any point on the user's body. The length of these slashes is limited only by the size of the barrier, as is the distance they can travel. 3 slashes per post; slashes have A-rank power and speed. The slashes can be infused with any one of the user’s elements, but this has no effect other than the obvious normal elemental advantages shown in the rules, and jutsu-specific strengths, counters, and weaknesses.
C-rank cost per post.


Wordcount to learn: 3000
Bonus Requirements:
- Kozai Rinku only

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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Sun May 17, 2015 11:51 am

Bamp!
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Sun May 17, 2015 11:57 am

So within the barrier you just slash their aorta,

Yeah no.

I'm not dumb.

This needs to be fixed.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Mon May 18, 2015 8:19 am

Ouf, didn't mean for that. I put "any free space", after all. Regardless, I see your point, edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Mon May 18, 2015 12:50 pm

Wunderbar!

Space/Time is the jutsu type for this I imagine? A Head mod should not be forgetting jutsu types now Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Mon May 18, 2015 10:25 pm

I actually do believe that on teh Zanpakutou app, the jutsu from Zans are stated to be "typeless". Please correct me if I'm wrong, however.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Tue May 19, 2015 12:31 pm

Ah, then Zan or Typeless should be there. Blanks just weird me the heck out.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Thu May 21, 2015 8:42 am

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikai: Sever, Taisen   Thu May 21, 2015 9:48 am

Alright, have someone else look this over but it looks pretty decent to me.

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