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PostSubject: Rupture: Hiken    Fri May 15, 2015 3:01 pm

Name: Rupture: Hiken
Rank: SS
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Duration/Cooldown: Until deactivated/2 posts
Range: -

Appearance: A bright red chakra aura, extending from the user's hand.
 

What it does: The user extends the Rupture technique, turning it into a raikiri-like blade around his hand. However, with focus and power, the user can extend this. Rather than just a blade of katon chakra, the user can choose at any moment to extend this blade of pure heat and katon chakra up to 3 meters. Expansion and jutsu formation occur at the speed of this jutsu's rank. Sharpness and burning power of the blade is this jutsu's power.
The power of this jutsu, however, is not the same as the contact-version of Rupture. Due to the formations of katon chakra in the blade, and its heat interactions, it gains a +1 power/sharpness against metal objects. The heat in this specific technique sets up a resonance in the "sea of electrons" within the metal, making it easier to cut with this jutsu.
B-rank per post to maintain.  



Wordcount to learn: 5000
Bonus Requirements:
- Know Rupture
- Kozue Aburame or learn from her

Backstory: As soon as she found that Rupture was actually useful, Kozue worked on making a more applicable use of it.


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PostSubject: Re: Rupture: Hiken    Sun May 17, 2015 11:55 am

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PostSubject: Re: Rupture: Hiken    Sun May 17, 2015 11:58 am

Isn't Rupture SS ranked?

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PostSubject: Re: Rupture: Hiken    Sun May 17, 2015 12:00 pm

Yes, this is a derivative jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Rupture: Hiken    Sun May 17, 2015 2:35 pm

Ah I'd prefer this be SS too then

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PostSubject: Re: Rupture: Hiken    Sun May 17, 2015 10:21 pm

Done, upped the cost and WC to learn accordingly.
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PostSubject: Re: Rupture: Hiken    Mon May 18, 2015 12:53 pm

Alrighty, have another admin check this over, I don't find too much wrong with it but everyone's opinion matters in that team for these.

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