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PostSubject: Sir Kay: The Earth Dragon   Sun Feb 15, 2015 11:05 am

Name: Sir Kay
Race: Dragon

Appearance: 10 feet tall by 20 meters long, by 10 meters wide kay is a massive beast. More like a turtle than a dragon really. He carries himself with a wide stance, very sturdy to be able to support his massive form. His jaw has a large underbite, and a maw filled with sharp crystal teeth, made of emeralds, ruby, and sapphire. His thick legs carry a jagged looking carapace of stone. Which has a single tree growing out from the top of it.

Special Abilities:
Diamond Carapace: The immensely strong scales and hide of Sir Kay make doing damage to him extremely difficult. Any attack performed on him has it's power reduced by his health before damage calculation begins..

Earthly assimilation: While staying stationary Sir Kay can meditate for a time, and become one with the earth. He begins to absorb the surrounding earth around him and add it to his own girth, and gaining +1 health for every meter. Gaining a square meter in size for every square meter he takes from the earth. He can only absorb a meter of earth per post in combat, but outside he can absorb as much as he wants. A cost Per meter absorbed. His health is capped at Ex. He can maintain his size for three threads without absorbing new earth before the earth finally breaks lose and he is reduced to his normal size. Earth absorbed outside of battle does not ad to his health.

Petrifying breath: Sir kay can breath out a gaseous solution from his mouth. While it only looks like hot breath to an onlooker it's really a gaseous form of earth that only this dragon can use. When caught within the breath the gass solidifies from heavy patches of stone onto the victim, reducing their speed by 1 rank. With a range of 50M, power of A, and a speed of A. If a person has less health than the power of this attack they are turned to stone for the remainder of the topic unless broken out. 3 turn cool down. A cost

Earth Stinger: Sir Kay can burry his jewl encrusted tail into the eart and materialize in on any earthy substance. Using it as a surprise attack for any unwary foes. The tail materializes at a speed of S, and has a sharpness of C. B cost.

Quarry: Sir Kay can Make a 10x10x10ft Cube of Earth Levitate out of the Earth and move around freely. The Cubes have a Health of B, and a speed of B. Sir Kay can launch these Cubes like missiles by roaring at them and sending them flying at a speed equal to his chakra. This move has no cool Down but costs B per Block levitated, and an extra D to launch them. 50m range.

Passive Abilities:
Telepathy
He can sense any presence touching the earth for 100 meters
Dig
Fangs
Swimming. (He can adjust his density)


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PostSubject: Re: Sir Kay: The Earth Dragon   Sun Feb 15, 2015 12:30 pm

ok  I took a look and I need a couple things changed.  

first is you Earthly assimilation needs to worked out a bit.  You say that outside of battle he can absorb 100m of earth.  then you say it's 50CP per meter.  that is 5000CP to absorb 100m of earth, then you say +10 health per meter which would end up being 1000 health which of course contradicts the 300 cap that you set.  

Now I like the cap of 300 however you state that that is the cap for all stats which is not true.  we don't have a current stat cap.  however there will be one for this ability and I like 300.  Now as for you numbers.  it makes sense what you're trying to do but here is the loop hole.  before battle the dragon uses it's infinite CP to gain 1000 health.  as it is not a battle this will be over looked.  Then a battle begins.  now people need to decide whether you have an indestructible dragon or an unconscious one.  here is how you fix it.  

"but outside he can absorb up to 100M before finally reaching his limit"

If you take that out then there is no limit to what he can do outside of battle.  which honestly is how we do it here.  but inside battle he is limited to his abilities.  just add in that all earth absorbed outside of battle is not calculated into his health in battle.

For Earth stinger, I like the ability however you need to lower the sharpness to 50 or increase the CP to 100 to be on the same page with our ranking system.  150 sharpness with 100 speed is stats for a normal SS rank thing.  30 is the cp cost for a B ranked thing.

for metal consumption.  I'm afraid as the earth dragon I can't let it do this as there is a steel dragon.  sorry if you set your heart on it.  you can make a different ability here.

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PostSubject: Re: Sir Kay: The Earth Dragon   Sun Feb 15, 2015 2:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Sir Kay: The Earth Dragon   Tue Feb 17, 2015 10:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Sir Kay: The Earth Dragon   Fri Feb 20, 2015 3:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Sir Kay: The Earth Dragon   Fri Feb 20, 2015 3:54 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Sir Kay: The Earth Dragon   Mon Apr 13, 2015 8:13 pm

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