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PostSubject: C-2   Sat Feb 21, 2015 6:18 pm

Name: C-2 Dragon
Rank: B-Rank
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Explosive
Duration/Cooldown: Until destroyed/ Once per thread.
Range: 50M Flying Range. 10M For The Explosion of the Dragon,


Appearance:


The Dragon has a 7 Meter long Body, with a 10M Long Tail. It Stands 3 Meters tall, and has a Twenty Meter Wingspan.
 

What it does:
-Gives The User a Mount to ride on
-Health is equal to the User's Chakra Capacity capped at B
-Can Channel a total of 10 explosive clay moves through it's body, by taking clay away from it's tail and wings.
-Can Launch Clay Dragon's from it's mouth. (Counts as a B Ranked Jutsu. Speed, Power, etc... 1 per turn.) 5M Explosive Range
-Can Spit out 10 clay mines. These mines can't move and can't be launched form the dragon's mouth. They kind of just dribble out. (They're also a B-Ranked Jutsu) 5M Explosive Range

Mines and the Birds have a 5M Explosive Range
When The Dragon Is detonated it has a 10M Explosive Range

Wordcount to learn: 3000
Bonus Requirements: Explosive Clay


Backstory:One of Deidara's specialties, that requires the use of both of his palm mouths, creating a large dragon. The dragon itself is capable of flight and while Deidara is safely on its back, the dragon can spit out smaller clay figures that attack the opponent like guided missiles.

These independent missile-like creatures take the form of a greatly reduced version of the larger dragon that created them, however, despite this decrease in size they are still relatively larger than a normal person. Each is capable of tracking their intended target and producing a significant explosion proportional to size upon contact but as they emerge, they consume a substantial amount of clay from the original dragon, initially extracting it from the creature's tail. This ultimately limits the number that each C2 "Dragon" is capable of creating, before clay must be sacrificed from more vital areas, such as the body or wings. By using more clay, the missile's size and explosive power can be substantially increased.

The dragon can also produce clay mines at the expense of clay, that take the form of small spherical creatures, which can be subsequently manipulated to force opponents to fight in a limited space. This is achieved through the use of Tobi's Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique, to hide a large amount of these mines underground, without the opponents' knowledge to their exact location. When this tactic is combined with the previously mentioned missiles, it can confine the enemies' movements to such an extent, that they are forced to suffer an explosion.


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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Sat Feb 21, 2015 7:39 pm

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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Sun Apr 12, 2015 6:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:37 pm

Health shouldn't be higher than A rank unless you want to sacrifice a rank in another area.

Clarify that ten meters is the diameter of the explosion.

With that fixed this looks fine by me.

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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:40 pm

Okey Doke

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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:50 pm

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Each rank of jutsu is limited in the power it can possess. The power allowed for each rank of jutsu is determined by its rank. A "B" ranked jutsu may only have "B" ranked power and speed as determined by the stat rules.

So if you make it's speed like D, and changed it to user's chakra capacity minus one I could let it slide for B rank.

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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:58 pm

Woah Sorry I completely forgot about health. I but the cap at B. But if you were saying that it has too many abilities to have it's stats. Then I'll adjust them.

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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:58 pm

Nah capping at B works just fine too haha

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PostSubject: Re: C-2   Mon May 18, 2015 11:43 pm

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