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PostSubject: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 4:57 am

Name: Fire Release: Explosive Flame
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire Release
Duration/Cooldown: 4 Posts
Range: 5 Meters Explosion: 3 Meters
Base Power: 60
Base Speed: 60

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A round ,dark red explosion with an orange outline. In the end of the jutsu,it will disappear like dust.


  

What it does: The user will perform the handsigns: Ram,Horse,Ram,Dog,Horse. Then the user will hold out their hand and stare at a spot in a 5 meter distance. A spark will appear where they stare at,and 750 milliseconds later,a round ,small,but deadly,explosion will occur. It will not cause any damage to the Earth unless directly targeted at it. The spark is a chance for a character with at least 40 speed to escape.



Wordcount to learn: 2000
Chakra Cost: 30
Bonus Requirements: N/A
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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 12:16 pm

Yeah take out that may it be cancelled stuff and 40 speed to escape, the maxiumum stat cap for a Jutsu is 50 (at b rank)

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 2:34 pm

The explosion also needs a range. And like Hikari said, speed and power cant be above 50 for B rank

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:32 pm

I said it may NOT be cancelled. Took it out anyways.

Also edited everything else.
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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:36 pm

That was a typo, sorry. Explosion needs a detonation range (not where you make it happen, like how far it expands)

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:57 pm

I have a detonation range....the explosion range.. .
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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:58 pm

"Stare at a spot in a 5m distance"
= the explosion occurs within 5m of you. I see nothing on how big the explosion is

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 9:00 pm

Copy and Paste
Range: 5 Meters Explosion: 3 Meters




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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Tue Mar 03, 2015 9:53 pm

very well. Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Explosive Flame   Wed Mar 11, 2015 3:57 am

edited power/speed IAW jutsu rules

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