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PostSubject: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 5:16 am

Name: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks
Rank: B
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Fire Release
Duration/Cooldown: 2 Posts
Range: Self
Base Power: 60
Base Speed: 60

Appearance:
 Basically,imagine fire on both of your feet ,plus a combo of high and low kicks.

What it does:
The user uses their chakra to form fire on their feet. There are no handsigns. The user then attacks the enemy with a ferocity of high and low kicks. The user can do up to 7 kicks with enough strength.



Wordcount to learn: 2000
Chakra Cost: 35
Bonus Requirements: N/A
(add if it is meant for a specific character here)

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Last edited by Atarashi Uchiha on Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:27 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 6:41 am

Change that "damage" to stat boosts. Taijutsu are meant to buff current stats

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 10:05 am

Copy and paste where I stated that as I just don't see it.
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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 12:13 pm

Just look at your what it does. "Damage" does not exist in a Jutsu, that's what power is for. I suggest that you read up on the Jutsu rules as the would be power is ridiculously underpowered compared to others. Also, don't forget that since its a taijutsu it can include stat boost. I'll give you a hand here, the maximum cap numberwise would be 50 for b rank, so you would be able to have a +50 stat boost to speed and the flames can have 50 power

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:18 pm

Edited damage. Not adding stat boosts for reasons.
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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:21 pm

Once again, 15 would be in the D rank qualifications and 60 in a rank. Change them both to a solid 50 and your golden. Also I see no edits

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:27 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Tue Mar 03, 2015 8:34 pm

Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Fire Release: Flaming Fury Kicks   Wed Mar 11, 2015 3:56 am

edited power/speed IAW jutsu rules

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