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Resonate "Near" River
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Resonate


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Join date : 2015-01-18

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PostSubject: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Hell   Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Hell EmptySat Apr 18, 2015 1:17 am

Name: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Hell
Rank: A rank
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Duration/Cooldown: Last 3 post/ 5 post cooldown
Range: 30 meters

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What it does:The user, after using needle jizo, quickly returns chakra back to their hair, causing it to spark with lightning chakra. After so it is shot off like rockets from the retracting hair. shooting off about ten hair strands that quickly turn into lightning bolts aimed for the target. Although easily dodged, the user is able to shoot off another ten after the first have successfully been released. The lightning travels up to 30 meters, the lightning loses 1 rank in damage after traveling 15 meters



Wordcount to learn: 3000
Bonus Requirements:
Needs to know Needle Jizo

Backstory:


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Roland Ootsutsuki
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Roland Ootsutsuki


Posts : 1195
Join date : 2015-03-07

Character sheet
Character Name: Roland
Clan: Ootsutsuki
Element: Fire, Wind, Earth

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Hell   Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Hell EmptySat Apr 18, 2015 10:28 am

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The user, after using needle jizo, quickly returns chakra back to their hair, causing it to spark with lightning chakra. After so it is shot off like rockets from the retracting hair. shooting off about 70 hair strands that quickly turn into lightning bolts aimed for the target. Although easily dodged, the user is able to shoot off another ten after the first have successfully been released.

So is it seventy at one time or ten?

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The Lightning bolts have the same effect as before, that being paralyzation to a greater level, 2 post.

With the current amount this is ridiculous an cannot be accepted if each one can cause this.


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The enemy can only be paralyzed if the enemies health stat is higher then the user's chakra stat.

This seems backwards and I swear to christ if people keep using chakra I will make an announcement about it, pick a sub-stat. For this as is, if you don't wish to change anything else, then the resist stat should be a health of C. If you lower the amount then maybe B or A, maybe.

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The lightning travels up to 30 meters, the lightning loses 1 ranks after traveling 15 meters

One rank meaning what?

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Kirito the Forest Sage
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Kirito the Forest Sage


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Join date : 2015-01-14
Age : 31

Character sheet
Character Name: Kirito Senju
Clan: Senju
Element: Water, Earth, Lightning, Wood, Coral

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Hell   Lightning Style: Broken Lightning Hell EmptyTue May 19, 2015 9:20 pm

this needs attention
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