Zengoranme (All-Seeing Eye) of the Nagakura Clan

Originating Clan: Uchiha and Hyuuga


Appearance:

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History: The bloodline was manifested after those from the Land of Fire who were once in the Hyuuga and Uchiha clan became part of the Nagakura clan, a clan of wanderers and the members of the Hyuuga and Uchiha had intercourse with each other creating the Zengoranme after generations of the Hyuga and Uchiha mixing within the Nagakura clan. Soon the whole clan obtained this after DNA was implanted into most of the members after the Doujutsu was manifested.


What it does: The Zengoranme (All-Seeing Eye) also referred to as Myōsekigan (Life Eye) allows the user to see the opponents chakra and allows them to remember it, the doujutsu has inherited this skill from both the Byakugan and Sharingan it originates from. The ability Sharingan has allows them to see the color of the chakra allowing them to remember it to distinguish someone from friend or foe and the Byakugan allows them to see and track the chakra from long distances. The eye also allows the user to create a mental map of the area granting them a 150 meter coverage of the area around them in all directions. The eyes increases your throwing speed by 2 Ranks, your overall speed by 1 Rank and your reaction time by 1 Rank.

Requirements: 2,000 words of training with the Nagakura's Ash Release is required to manifest this Doujutsu.

It takes 1,000 words to identify and remember chakra

Chakra Cost:

C-Rank to activate/D-Rank to maintain

Ok I'm going to be honest with you. You left out some key points for the see chakra part tell how many meters you can see the chakra and how good you can see the chakra is it on Byakugan level or Sharingan. Also for the mental map how big is the map in a square structure. And for the deadly accuracy with senbim and stuff I suggest you change that up and say you get 50+ added to throwing speed and your base speed also put a CP on the bloodline

This is a stupid question but what is a CP? xD

-_- if you do not know what CP is you should read the rules.

But CP or chakra points is the chakra given to you to use jutsu. If your chakra is 100 you have 1000 CP to use jutsu with. Some jutsu may cost 60CP to use given you 940CP left over when u use it. So thus bloodline needs a CP cost you should look at other doujutsu to get a idea

Yeah, I thought it was Chakra points but in the phrase you put it, it didn't make that much sense to be there.

Hahaa I guess but fix it

I'm more use to AP and fixed! Hope it's better, if it doesn't make sense I'll edit it some more.

Change the originating from Sharingan and Byakuga. Stuff please and I was saying the doujutsu raised your speed by 25 as well as your reaction time and your throwing speed by 50

Done.

Sorry but change the Mao thing to 150 meters

Done.

Approved

Requesting Re-approval.

Need a WC for how long it takes to identify and remember chakra, and will need a chakra cost for the eyes.

WC was included and the eyes had a cost, changed it to chakra cost instead of action cost. (Probably where the confusion kicked in, it was a template from an older doujutsu on the site)

Bump the words up to 1,000, bump up the costs. Then I can approve this.

Fixed

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bump up the costs

People say fixed all the time yet they just miss stuff.

Bump up the costs of activation and use to fit the benefits.